Extremely DISSAPOINTED Screenwriting
Eternal Love S-1 was good S-2, was too greasy had to drop it half way . Liang Jie brought me to YAMD,
Too many writing flaws, Frustrating Screenplay loopwholes.
1- mnay incidents make viewers wonder how did the situation occur ( either we run our guesses wild to connect the missing dots/ just ignore the flaws)
2- there is NO such CRUISE from Shanghai to Bahamas..
3- even after 4months Jiaxin's BABY BUMP doesn't show and she keeps wearing Clothes that are tied on the waist.. Who can wear such DRESSES while pregnant
4- the SECOND half STORY becomes more of the istigted Abortion rather than the Divorce clause(which made Jiaxin FRUSTRATED and accident lead to abortion)!
5- Hungary encounters were too messy. How all the three characters find the ADDRESSES of the hotel and their homes etc is pure STUPIDITY .
These characters move into the Hotel as if NO SECURITY for visitors inside! Again ,Really?? Which hotel!???
6- After returning to Shanghai, JIAXIN still acts NORMAL whenever the divorce talks pop up, Why would an educated, establised woman not hit back hard on the ex-husband on divorce talks.. series makers look it so easy!
7- Small and big SCREENPLAY FLAWS; viz
When ANNA & Dylan visit their parents GRAVE, soon after they are happy, smiling and discussing dates..??
Jiaxin Dating Dylan, Keeping attracted to Xiyi and Sharing PERSONAL feelings with Mr.W, makes her character as shady as Xiyi and Anna!! Whatt . Why??
Too many writing flaws, Frustrating Screenplay loopwholes.
1- mnay incidents make viewers wonder how did the situation occur ( either we run our guesses wild to connect the missing dots/ just ignore the flaws)
2- there is NO such CRUISE from Shanghai to Bahamas..
3- even after 4months Jiaxin's BABY BUMP doesn't show and she keeps wearing Clothes that are tied on the waist.. Who can wear such DRESSES while pregnant
4- the SECOND half STORY becomes more of the istigted Abortion rather than the Divorce clause(which made Jiaxin FRUSTRATED and accident lead to abortion)!
5- Hungary encounters were too messy. How all the three characters find the ADDRESSES of the hotel and their homes etc is pure STUPIDITY .
These characters move into the Hotel as if NO SECURITY for visitors inside! Again ,Really?? Which hotel!???
6- After returning to Shanghai, JIAXIN still acts NORMAL whenever the divorce talks pop up, Why would an educated, establised woman not hit back hard on the ex-husband on divorce talks.. series makers look it so easy!
7- Small and big SCREENPLAY FLAWS; viz
When ANNA & Dylan visit their parents GRAVE, soon after they are happy, smiling and discussing dates..??
Jiaxin Dating Dylan, Keeping attracted to Xiyi and Sharing PERSONAL feelings with Mr.W, makes her character as shady as Xiyi and Anna!! Whatt . Why??
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